Slashdolt wrote:
>My first real work since Radio Graves...
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>I'm open for comments/suggestions!
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>Slash
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Neat idea!

The monochrome background with just splashes of color in the butterflies is
great, but the color seems understated now. Adding the flowers would be
good, and maybe move a butterfly out in front or something to emphasize the
color a little more (although that may not even be necessary in a larger
render...)

Also, the rocks in the background seem too in line with each other, maybe
moving them around in relation to each other would give it more depth.

Look forward to the final!

RG

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